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Activity 5
Writing a summary of this text
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right.
On this page, you will see the original article from Appendix A in the
left-hand boxes. In the right-hand boxes is a summary. Look carefully at the original and summarised versions, and notice what
parts have been chosen for the summary. The summary tries to include only
the main arguments or points being made. It has missed out a lot of the
detail.
| Something is wrong with an education
system that allows a 12-year-old boy to attend school for only three
hours a day for art, PE, home economics and to play on computers.
He is not taught English or maths because his school cannot provide
him with a support teacher. Without one he would probably disrupt
the other pupils in his class: they would learn nothing and he would
learn nothing.
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In the article, Excluded by the system, the writer
starts off by telling us about a 12-year-old boy who attends school
for only three hours a day, because the school cant provide
the support teacher he needs. He would disrupt classes without such
support.
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| There are no easy solutions for teachers when they are confronted
with troublesome children like this, but his part-time existence
at school is no solution at all. An education system that fobs off
troublemakers with a few hours of so-called schooling a day, rather
than educate them, is failing itself, its misfit pupils and, in
the end, society. Rightly, the boys mother complains: It
is supposed to be an education, but he learns nothing at all.
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The writer feels that for the teachers, there are no easy answers,
but that its not fair on the boy. He feels that the current
system is failing the school, the boy and society.
The writer quotes the boys mother who says that he is learning
nothing.
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If this boys predicament was unusual, it would
be less worrying. But he is one of many such children. They are supposed
to receive a mainstream education but, because they are so difficult
to handle, schools cannot cope with them. So, instead of going against
the grain of government policy to keep troublemakers in the mainstream,
schools are discovering elaborate ways of minimising the disruption
to themselves while at the same time keeping their exclusion figures
low. |
The writer goes on to claim that this boy is only one
of many in the same situation difficult to handle. He claims
that schools use this system because it means they dont have
to exclude pupils. |
Common sense dictates that there are two principal options for
education policy-makers grappling with persistently disruptive pupils.
Either they should be sent to special schools or they should be
in ordinary schools reinforced with investment to create special
units, special projects and to hire support teachers. |
The writer feels that for pupils in this situation, there are two
options special schools or special units in existing schools.
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The Scottish Executive has chosen the latter option, but does not
seem to be funding it sufficiently for it to work, despite £23m
in the excellence fund for schools to set up alternatives
to exclusion. Money is not the only answer, but it helps.
The lack of it, and the governments target to cut exclusions
by one third by 2002, is having the effect of increasing the number
of halfway-house children who are being neither educated nor excluded. |
The Scottish Executive favours the special unit model, but isnt
funding it properly.
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The minister must look at the policy again. Unless, of course,
Labour intends to modify its mantra education, education,
education by adding the words except for children who
cause trouble. |
Partly because of a lack of appropriate funding, and
because schools are trying to cut exclusion figures, the number of
what the author refers to as halfway-house children who
are neither excluded nor being educated will grow. The writer concludes
by attacking government education policies, saying that they ignore
troublesome children. |
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